Ignite presentation learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

your ignite presentation feedback below:


 


Research – 4

Coursework concept – 3

Language: terminology and theory - 3

Representations / social and cultural contexts – 4

Audience and Industry / digital convergence – 3

Presentation delivery – 2

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Mr Pall’s feedback:


Very detailed summer project research blog task you have clearly spent a considerable amount of time considering your song choice and establishing a fictional band to represent.

Your coursework concept has considered the brief outline and requirements to promote the new pop band

During your presentation, you outlined the different TikTok videos and how they could promote your product whilst trying to engage a potential target audience

In places you use specific media terminology, but an area of improvement could have been to further link to media theorists

The billboards selection and curation during your presentation was not obvious but we managed to give you some ideas during the Q&A

The biggest area to improve was your delivery of your presentation, consider how you could address your audience more rather than reading off your phone

Timings was a slight issue as you overran by about a minute

 



Q&A:


Naturally, as we are a smaller class you handled these questions well and you were open to feedback and clarification

Kim asked you question about your band’s industry ownership which you were able to respond to

Janice also pushed you on your choice of billboards which then naturally gave you some ideas on how you would incorporate your band to this

 

 


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: 
  • Detailed  and planned out coursework
  • Was able to consider and meet the brief
  • outlined different Tik Tok videos and  how they could promote  the Band 
  •  Answered Q&A questions well  and  I was  pushed on  industry and billboards Questions 
EBI:
  • Area of improvement was a link to Media theorist
  •  billboards selection and curation during your presentation was not obvious
  • improve was your delivery of your presentation, consider how you could address your audience more rather than reading off your phone
  • Ran over time 


3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

I think That I will be able to keep a lot from my coursework, but I will need to change somethings  as I may change the concept of one of my Tik tok videos  as I think the 2nd and 3rd tik tok videos are to similar. This ,means I'm going to have to  tweak my statement of intent   on the tik tok videos I previously  mentioned  Also  for my print as I don't  think my print was very clear in my presentation or my ignite presentation. I think that   My coursework is achievable with the resources I have. Alternatively I think that  I could of included more media Terminology  and theorists such as  Bluer and Katz uses gratification theory. I think I  Will now be able to improve statement of internet.  

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