Cinematography video feedback/learner response

 1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.


good sequence- excellent use of pace and non-diegetic music to build tension and communicate narrative. Shorts are labelled accurately in general-was openly establishing shot more handheld/tilt rather than pan?

The confrontation uses some creative cinematography and effects but was difficult to follow in terms of dialogue or narrative. Lacking a punch sound effect too? This section uses close ups well which helps meet the brief.


2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

WWW:

  •   fitting  music
  • shots matched up
  • funny
  •  knockout shots
  • accurate shots 
  • well made storyline
EBI: sound muffled


3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs.

WWW

  • good storyline
  • great use of close ups
  • interesting's shots such the knock out seen
FAMILY
  • muffled sound
  • could add a punch effect
  •  make the dialogue clearer


4) Learner response: think about what you learned about cinematography making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

When I start my coursework in the summer I'm goin to write a shot list and script right away as it will preserve time and allow me  to know what my coursework will look like. I also think I nedd to learn a new style of camerawork as I always use still images


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