Mise-en-scene recreation: Learner response 1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full. .Actor placement/movement/expression is a real strength here for initial pushups, running and movement at top of the steps Costume also a strength-you've clearly thought about it and matched the original well. A couple Ebi's - one is setting/ locations. Could you have used a gym or non residential setting for the press ups? for the running, it would have been great to have been great to have the camera moving alongside. 2) Type up a summary of the feedback you have had from the rest of the class - bullet points is fine. WWW: the acting was extremely close to what rocky did and good camerawork the setting took place next to a river like the original scene and good actor placement. the fell of/atmosphere self triumphant and you did your best recreate the scene as best as you could EBI: Location and the running camera movement up ...
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