Sheldon Media A Level Coursework- Mr Halsey

 1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.  Well done on your preliminary exercise music video. Here is my feedback: WWW: Follows TikTok music video conventions Fast paced editing Excellent choreography which highlights a performance element to your music video Choice of costume fits the Hip Hop genre conventions A clear range of camera shots and slick editing EBI: Audio issue towards the end – check this when downloading songs and editing in Premiere Pro Lip syncing in some parts could be improved Slightly over the recommended length Consider your font style and formatting   2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work. WWW: Good brand identity  choreo is golden  jump cuts suit  the TikTok conventions lighting is great  release date given...

 1) TikTok video treatments You may already have THREE detailed TikTok video treatments from your summer project and/or preliminary exercise - definitely use or develop those if it works with your project.  However, you may need to update your treatment or even change it completely now you have finished your preliminary exercise.  Remember the brief lists the following possibilities: interviews/AMAs with band members  content created by band members  performances, live shows or personal appearances  band members taking on a TikTok challenge  the band interacting with fans  fan-made content  merchandise or promotion of the band’s music  any other content or combination of content you think would be appealing to the audience and promote the band effectively. The Video focuses on the first band member of the Clique called Jordan as we  see the 3 aspects of his life  the Artist/ rapper  the civilian/choreographer and the Busin...