Cinematography video feedback/learner response
1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher. good sequence- excellent use of pace and non-diegetic music to build tension and communicate narrative. Shorts are labelled accurately in general-was openly establishing shot more handheld/tilt rather than pan? The confrontation uses some creative cinematography and effects but was difficult to follow in terms of dialogue or narrative. Lacking a punch sound effect too? This section uses close ups well which helps meet the brief. 2) Type up your feedback from fellow students. WWW: fitting music shots matched up funny knockout shots accurate shots well made storyline EBI: sound muffled 3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs. WWW good storyline great use of close ups interesting's shots such the knock out seen FAMILY muffled sound could add a punch effect make the dialogue clearer 4) Learner response: think...