1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).  WWW:Q1 is strong: good analysis  of the  unseen text  with specific  reference  to the  poster  and wordily  in the question  EBI: Q2 is  the area  to work on: industry  and audience  are the  key concept here  and I would  revise these areas  - planning will help -the key  points   here  were the changes in technology ( consumption + distribution) and  no global nature  of the  industry  now 2) Read the mark scheme for this exam carefully, paying particular attention to the 'indicative content' for each question. Firstly, focus on the unseen question (Q1) and identify two points that you could have written in your answer.  the skyline of contemporary/futuristic skyscrapers are signifiers of the city, banking/finance etc; this is reinforced by the costume...